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Abandoned pt. 2, protector

 
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:44 am    Post subject: Abandoned pt. 2, protector Reply with quote

Thanks for the comments on the first part, heres the second

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Abandoned pt. 2, savior




As John was sleeping, he felt something big nudging him in the back. He tried to push it away so he could keep sleeping, but it would not budge. Suddenly the nudging got rougher until he was pushed and fell onto a hard surface. He opened his eyes but saw nothing but darkness. A flame appeared on the tip of his finger so he could see, he looked up to see a large, furry hand. His looked further up to see a huge worried orange fox face looking down at him. John stood up and stretched and looked around to see that they were still on the stage in the abandoned theatre of the deserted town.

You ok? The large fox girl asked.
Im fine, just a little tired. John answered rubbing his eyes and looked out the hole in the back of the building to see that the sun wasnt even up yet. He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out his cell phone to see that it was only 4:00am.
whyd you wake me up so early? he asked leaning against Kamiis side as she lay on her back.
I couldnt sleep, and it was dark, I got scared. She answered slightly embarrassed.
Youre a little over 50 feet tall, what could you be scared of John joked. She blushed slightly and picked up the small human and dropped him on her belly. John sat and scratched at her bellyfur lighty.
I got lonely I guess she smiled and petted at him lightly. Suddenly there was a loud noise coming from outside. Kamii made a loud meep in surprise and rolled off the stage and onto rows of empty seats, crushing them while holding a handpaw over John who was still on her belly.

She slowly picked herself up and lifted John up to her face.
Im so sorry, something scared meare you alright? she looked down at him worriedly.
YeahI think so he nodded, a little shaken up. Kamii crawled out the large hole in the back of the building and looked around, holding John protectively to her stomach. John wiggled out of her and jumped down to the ground, landing on his feet. He held a finger up to his lips and looked up at the fox girl and snuck down the empty street. The houses were empty, and there was garbage and random papers all over. The whole place had a creepy empty feel to it. Suddenly a large black hand came out of nowhere and grabbed him. John struggled and squirmed around and looked up to see two large, red eyes. Another hand came and grabbed the back of his jacket by the hood and held him up. John looked up to see a dark red furred coyote, he could see that it was male. John Kicked and punched at the air causing himself to spin around, the coyote only laughed.

Let him go Kamii yelled and ran at the coyote
No, hes bigger than you! John yelled to the young fox girl. She didnt listen and kept running at the coyote holding him. The coyote lifted his other hand and smacked Kamii with the back of his paw knocking her into a building, causing it to fall. He looked down at the tiny human in his grasp. John dangled there, his eyes covered by hair, all he could see was two small red dots glaring up at him. The human pulled off his gloves and reached two clawed hands up to his own face. The coyote watched in curiosity as John began ripping his own face off revealing a black face, his eyes were black with red dots for pupils, and his mouth was full of sharp fangs.
Youbastard John growled. The coyote almost dropped him in surprise. He wrapped his handpaw around the human and squeezed hard. John just smiled and bit down on the fingers, causing blood to pour out the side as he tore a large chunk of flesh. The coyote growled and threw John at a ground and grasped his handpaw in pain.

What are you!? He growled at the tiny human. John just giggled and got up, walking calmly back towards him.
Just a human John answered and pounced at him and clawed at his belly leaving small, but deep wounds as he began biting and tearing at the flesh as hard as he could. The coyote began screaming in pain as he fell to the ground and looked at the human on his stomach. He stared into the tiny eyes, going into a trancelike state, reliving every nightmare he had, it seemed like an eternity was only a couple of seconds. John jumped off the coyote leaving him shivering and mumbling to himself.

Kamii opened her eyes and groaned as she sat up and looked to see the coyote that had attacked them laying against some crushed buildings, he looked terrified and was covered in blood. She looked around to find John limping towards her, covered in blood, his face black with red eyes, the black faded from his face like a shadow and his eyes returned to their original, calming state. The fox girl backed away a little as John walked up to her foot and hugged her ankle.
Wha-what did you do? Kamii asked as she picked John up carefully and brought him up to her face to find that he had tears in his eyes.
Are you hurt? he asked, hugging her muzzle.
A little. Kamii lay on the ground as John rubbed at the side of girls muzzle where she got hit. She gently lifted John up and hugged him against her belly.
Dont worry, Ill protect you. he said softly.
Thank you Kamii smiled as they drifted back to sleep.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This part was very cute to read.

I very much will look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the feeling. And the simple fact that john went into protective demon mode was pritty cool >_> *cough* sooo KEEP GOING!!!!! Very Happy
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