FoxChess wrote:The end? Aww, but there was still half a meter to grow! I wanted to see the max.
Seriously though, I liked those glances back she gave after growing.
Yeah, still half the meter left to go, but, in this case, I think it's better to let people imagine what can happen next. Actually, looking at it, I think if anything this would be better expanded as a written story. I think in writing it could really capture the whole, blading through the city, starting at micro size then working up, going from dodging people's feet, to zipping in and out of traffic, to creating your own traffic flow.
I definitely think writing would suit it better, but for now, yep, it's the end.
Narzain wrote:Very nice! The grow-blades are a neat concept. And I love the idea that they're going macro just to make it cross-country quickly enough to grab lunch on the coast. That's just... inspired. (I'm guessing the next setting on the gauge is for interstate travel?)
Am I hallucinating, or was that Aryanna (and possibly Clare) in a cameo? All I can say is, that's either the world's best milkshake, or she took epic-level skills in "casual indifference."
Glad you like it, I had to have some sort of interesting reason for them to be doing what they're doing, aside from just causing trouble in the city, though I'm sure people wouldn't mind that sort of goal either.
And yes, that is indeed Aryanna. Demons do have a way of doing exactly the opposite of what you'd expect them to. The other two cameos are Kat and Amanda, though you only see the back of Kat's head when they're in her car. I've been meaning to give Clare a redesign on her hairstyle, now that I've got two black panthers, maybe it'd be a good time for that.
Kewney wrote:Hopefully the streets are made for macro rollerskates... but probably not =3
In a place where macros are common, you'd expect some sort of planning ahead of time, but, for a cross country trip, yeah, odds are not ever place is gonna be prepared, so there will probably be some destruction in their wake, even though they don't mean it.