Please don't eat the soap Rhoxie...
KidoftheJ wrote:Wow. That's actually kinda heavy on the heart. But great job on making it like a movie though. Very good.
joshimus wrote:yes yes tia the dark side is strong within you join us
Narzain wrote:Elegant solution; she's thinking like a cop. And the crushed ribcage would be pretty close to the damage from a steering column at high speed with no seat belt. And, of course, the investigation of said scumbag probably won't be too intensive.
I really like the flashback of the burning car merging into the present of the burning pan. Excellent cinematic touch.
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