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Postby macrokat » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:33 pm

Duct Tape Fanatic wrote:Hilarious, only thing that would make it a better satire would be if the porn-monger asked Tia "are you a she or a shi?"


:lol: That would definitely have to come before the 4'th panel though, 'cause, he's gettin' a pretty good view of his own from that vantage point. :D

Wow, never even thought of anything like that though. Very nice.
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Postby Narzain » Thu Oct 07, 2010 1:06 am

Hm. Wouldn't have thought of a macro doing an undercover op; I like it. And she'll get better results this way than by threatening people.

For some reason, the pornmonger looks a lot like one of the characters from Tygger's 'Guardian Knights' comic (if anyone remembers that). Not in design or anything, just something about his expression when he's staring up her skirt. Or I could just be hallucinating again...
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Postby macrokat » Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:54 pm

Narzain wrote:Hm. Wouldn't have thought of a macro doing an undercover op; I like it. And she'll get better results this way than by threatening people.

For some reason, the pornmonger looks a lot like one of the characters from Tygger's 'Guardian Knights' comic (if anyone remembers that). Not in design or anything, just something about his expression when he's staring up her skirt. Or I could just be hallucinating again...


Ehh... kind of... remember she's looking for illegal videos, etc. and people associated with those sorts of things would most likely expect her to be pulling something, especially if you mention those specific things.

Though, we see what happens now. ;)

I wanted to make this page difference, to show a bit of a break, craziness, I could have done the normal, stomp thing, but, that just seemed to lack the emotional/breaking impact, so this page underwent a few redesigns. I really like this one though, shows a bit of evil creeping in to our heroin's mind. :D
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Postby Marcusaralius76 » Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:34 pm

So Tia goes from Dirty cop to fired dirty cop to working off the clock fired dirty cop to murderous working off the clock fired dirty cop... about right?
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Postby FoxChess » Thu Oct 14, 2010 1:30 am

o.O Hoo boy... this ain't good...
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Postby rhoxy_runekin » Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:17 am

that pop was the bag of animal shaped fruit snacks in his pocket right?... right? *looks concerned*
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Postby macrokat » Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:34 am

Marcusaralius76 wrote:So Tia goes from Dirty cop to fired dirty cop to working off the clock fired dirty cop to murderous working off the clock fired dirty cop... about right?


Possibly dirty cop, allegedly, but yes, she has now crossed that line and discovered that sometimes Kat's way of doing things is just easier.

FoxChess wrote:o.O Hoo boy... this ain't good...


Depends on which side your on, Tia just discovered a quicker more effective way to get information... the other guy... just discovered a REALLY quick weight loss program? :shock:

rhoxy_runekin wrote:that pop was the bag of animal shaped fruit snacks in his pocket right?... right? *looks concerned*


Yeah, you know what it must have been, his pack of cigarettes, or his lighter. Everyone says smoking is bad for you after all, that has to be it. ;)
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Postby Theophilous_Bolt » Thu Oct 14, 2010 1:05 pm

It's fun when someone pushes things so far, they cross the line - and discover they really enjoy being on the wrong side of it.

Just read this from the beginning, and it's amazing - great plot, fun characters - just a consistently entertaining comic.
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Postby Narzain » Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:55 pm

Oh... oh, dear. Well, violence is also a long-accepted means of getting information... (See, this is why I don't script-write; I'm usually wrong).

I can just picture Kat going "FINALLY she starts to understand!"
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Postby macrokat » Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:34 pm

Theophilous_Bolt wrote:It's fun when someone pushes things so far, they cross the line - and discover they really enjoy being on the wrong side of it.

Just read this from the beginning, and it's amazing - great plot, fun characters - just a consistently entertaining comic.


We don't know whether or not she enjoys it yet. We've seen she's had issues with built up anger, but this is the first time she's killed someone, especially in such a manor, so we'll have to see how she handles it.

Glad to hear you enjoy it, trying to make sure it stays entertaining and keep the twists flowing.

Narzain wrote:Oh... oh, dear. Well, violence is also a long-accepted means of getting information... (See, this is why I don't script-write; I'm usually wrong).

I can just picture Kat going "FINALLY she starts to understand!"


Something like that. ;)
As far as scrip writing goes, if you were writing the script, then you would be right, 'cause it's your script. This was part of the idea from the beginning though, in their real stories (with the exception of Kat) these are all nice level-headed characters, and I wanted to push them in the opposite direction, they've all had their twists, but, it would seem Tia's the most sensitive as everything's hitting her much harder, and changing her into someone very different than everyone thought she was.

Of course, it's all good, 'cause remember, they're just acting after all. ;)
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