Aronos

[Chinchy]

Thankies, everyoneX3 From what I hear, I'm gonna need luck if I wanna get it published.XP Right now I'm working on the plot and characters. Once I'm ready to start actually writing it, I'l probably post a snippet if I canX3

[zukezorin]

You've got an interesting idea there, and I'm sure folks here can offer advice on improvement once you get something up. There's nothing that improves a story like criticism.