Never Say Never Again (Part 1)

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Never Say Never Again (Part 1)

Postby Trick The Fox » Tue Mar 15, 2016 11:43 am

Part one of a story I've written up, starring my character, Lt. Reynard, the giant 25.5 meter tall UN Peacekeeper titan anthro-fox, serving the Titan Control Initiative. Reynard is granted the great honor of being able to meet an actual head-of-state in person for a treaty-inauguration, but will the Consortium's representative cause the big fox to lose his cool?

Lt. Reynard and the Titan Control Initiative are solely my creation. This story takes place in the 'Hazard Pay' universe that FA-user Miateshcha and I co-created, a contemporary-based setting of macro-furs written with an emphasis on 'realism', or at least realistic-ness. No existing titans were harmed in the writing of this piece.

Part two should be coming soon!

Contains harsh language and scenes of crush.

Unfortunately it's too long to fit in a message post here (ha, I tried, I am just TOO BIG FOR MACRO RIGHT) so you'll have to check it out on my FA account over here. Don't worry, it's set to general access, so anyone can read it!
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19310450/

I would love to hear your thoughts and feedback on it!
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Check out my legit writings at http://www.writing.com/authors/L1011Widebody , my furry writings and gallery at http://www.furaffinity.net/user/trickthefox/ , and my Let's Plays videos at http://www.youtube.com/user/L1011Widebody
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Re: Never Say Never Again (Part 1)

Postby -F74M3F0X » Wed Mar 23, 2016 7:02 am

It's a very nice piece. It does have a sense of realism, definitely the tension between both cultures and sizes. For some reason, however, I can't help but picture an Attack On Titan-esque past with cannons instead of maneuver gear, especially when you wrote about Napoleon and his cannons getting close to too large to use!
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