The City's a Stage

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Re: The City's a Stage

Postby littlepeople » Wed Feb 22, 2017 6:52 am

I really love this story. Your characters are well drawn. I can see there's a future for Jake. Will this story be continued(I hope)? :)
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Re: The City's a Stage

Postby kool kitty89 » Sat Apr 08, 2017 11:23 am

Gotta love that speed-talking calico. XD

Looks like Bennie's stirred a hornet's nest ... while poor Derek is tangled up with that slinky weasel. (on that note, I think you called her a ferret at one point in the last chapter too ... not sure if that was intentional or not, but you introduced her as a weasel back in 2014)
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Re: The City's a Stage

Postby Kusanagi » Sat Apr 15, 2017 12:41 am

kool kitty89 wrote:Gotta love that speed-talking calico. XD

Looks like Bennie's stirred a hornet's nest ... while poor Derek is tangled up with that slinky weasel. (on that note, I think you called her a ferret at one point in the last chapter too ... not sure if that was intentional or not, but you introduced her as a weasel back in 2014)


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