A sneak Peek.

by **Arnavon** » Fri Mar 14, 2008 5:02 am

Welp, I've picked up the pencil again, (so to speak) and am in the process of writing another story. To get some form of feedback or encouragement, here's a small sneak peek:

â€œThe parade!!â€

by **General von Macrophilius** » Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:29 pm

hmmm..not bad but you should probably post this in the Story Forum ^^

by **baggy52** » Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:43 pm

General von Macrophilius wrote:hmmm..not bad but you should probably post this in the Story Forum ^^

Too bad most people ignore the Story Forum...

by **General von Macrophilius** » Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:26 pm

baggy52 wrote:
General von Macrophilius wrote:hmmm..not bad but you should probably post this in the Story Forum ^^

Too bad most people ignore the Story Forum...

yes quite a shame

by **padfootsm** » Sat Mar 15, 2008 1:39 am

As a wise queen once said when trying to save her son...

"Not all..."

by **TShaw** » Sun Mar 16, 2008 6:37 am

Thatâ€™s a nice start. And yes there are plenty of people who check out the story section. It may seem like being stranded on an island out of the shipping lanes at times but a lot of us consider that a plus.

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